Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Revised

Random person # 1: Don't forget the sample sale at Tara Lynn Bridal on Saturday May 28th.

Random person # 2: There are going to be discounts on the unique eco-friendly items at Tara Lynn Bridal.

Random person # 1: That's right! Tara Lynn has made samples for photoshoots, fashion shows, and fittings and they are going to be on sale on May 28th from 9 AM to 5 PM.There will be wedding and prom dresses, jackets and more.

MUSIC: Little bit of jazz

Announcer: Don't miss the sample sale at Tara Lynn Bridal on May 28th from 9 AM to 5 PM where unique fashion items will be sold at a discounted price. Find out more about Tara Lynn Bridal at taralynnbridal.com.

MUSIC: Jazzy (fade out at: 29)

Monday, November 28, 2011

2nd radio ad script

Random person # 1: We can't forget to miss the sample sale at Tara Lynn Bridal on Saturday May 28th.

Random person # 2: Are you saying that there are going to be discounts on the unique eco-friendly items at Tara Lynn Bridal?

Random person # 1: That's right! All items that Tara Lynn has made as samples
for photoshoots, fashion shows, and fittings are going to be on sale
on May 28th from 9 AM to 5 PM, Tara Lynn Bridal
will have a huge sale on her merchandise!
There will be wedding and prom dresses, jackets and more.

MUSIC: Little bit of jazzy

Tara Lynn: Don't miss our sample sale here at Tara Lynn Bridal
on May 28th from 9 AM to 5 PM where my unique fashion
items will be being sold at a discounted price!
Find out more about Tara Lynn Bridal at taralynnbridal.com

MUSIC: Jazzy (fade out at: 29)


Radio Ad Edited by Tara Lynn

Prom is months away, but you need to plan now because you don't want just
any dress, you are unique, and you deserve the dress of your dreams. Talk to
Tara Lynn Bridal now and you can have a dress custom-made to make your prom
day memorable. At Tara Lynn Bridal choose from several styles, select from
designer fabrics or call 467-9036 for alterations. Call 467-9036 or visit
taralynnbridal.com now to find out more. Be enchanting. Be stunning. Be
radiant. Be you!

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Revised radio ad


Prom is months away, but you need to plan now because you don't want just any dress, you are unique, and you deserve the dress of your dreams. Talk to Tara Lynnn Bridal now and you can have an eco-friendly dress custom-made to make this day perfect and memorable. Tara Lynn bridal will use only organic materials to create your dress. Visit taralynnbridal.com now to find out more. Be enchanting. Be stunning. Be radiant. Be you!



Newspaper Ad

The visual for this advertisement is an image that Tara Lynn Bridal has been using for promotional material in 2011. The logo for Tara Lynn Bridal is the script text that is used at the top of the page. The subhead is at the top of the page which describes that the product is a wedding dress and it fulfills the need for a bride to be themselves on their wedding day. The call to action asking readers to visit the website is the largest font which makes it also able to serve as the headline. It stands out among the other text even though it is towards the bottom of the advertisement. On the other hand, the headline is at the top of the advertisement and that is where they eye starts when moving across the page. The body copy for the advertisement is Andalyne’s quote. The mandatory text was not relevant in this case so the fine print states that Tara Lynn Bridal donates 5% of profits to Umbrella. The zinger text uses repetition to catch the attention of the reader with the words, “Be Unique. Be Radiant. Be you”. The zinger also serves as a headline. There is no swing line used in this advertisement because the quote for the body text stands on its own.

Radio AD

Be enchanting. Be stunning. Be radiant. Be you! Come to Tara Lynn Bridal for quality and eco-friendly custom clothing that fits your body as well as your personality.The services provided by Tara Lynn Bridal include custom made wedding dresses, prom dresses, tailoring, and more. Find out more at taralynnbridal.com. Make sure to custom order your prom or bridal dress from Tara Lynn Bridal 3-6 months ahead of time!

Old and New

Old Old Spice

The first radio ad that I chose is for Old Spice. The older ad is about thirty seconds long, and a man with a very deep manly voice is reading it. He is appealing to wives to buy their husbands Old Spice for father’s day, saying that whatever kind of man he is, outdoor or indoor, he must be an Old Spice man. The target audience of this seemed to be to the woman wanting her man to smell good. The unique benefit seemed to be the versatility; every man could wear Old Spice. At the end of the ad there is a little jingle about Old Spice which is probably the most creative part of the ad, and the most appealing. The strategy here was to advertise to married women with children around father’s day.

New Old Spice:

While I couldn’t find an actually radio ad for Old Spice that was recent, I did find a video that would be able to be used on the radio and have the same effect. This video has a man who says he doesn’t really fight octopi, drive a boat, or have money flowing out of his pockets, but when he’s wearing Old Spice, women don’t know the difference. This ad is far more sexual than that older one because of the difference in time. It targets men who want to attract women, which is a pretty large target. The “unique benefit” would be getting women to fall all over you on false pretenses, and that is also the creativity of the ad (though I think it was Axe who actually started this idea, and it was therefore their idea). The advertising strategy is to make people laugh about something that is fairly ludicrous while subconsciously making them desire it.

Old Reeses:

I like the classic look of the old Reeses ad. Compared to the modern one, it is simple and subdued. It is already focusing on the fact that it is an established brand name, by writing “the original for over a quarter of a century”. The target audience is anyone who loves chocolate 9it’s made in chocolate town, how can it not be good?). The unique benefit would probably be the fact that they know what they are doing because they have been around for so long, and pointing this out would also be their advertising strategy. You also see the name Reeses 11 times in this ad making it impossible to miss. I’m not entirely sure what the creative aspect of it would be because it’s pretty straight forward and laid out simply.

New Reeses:

The target audience for this ad, with its bright colors and simple design, seems to be a different one than of the old ad. This ad says “every day is your birthday with Reeses”. I feel like this addresses our more self-centered society making it all about the reader. This audience would be anybody who loves Reeses and anybody who wants to feel special every day. The unique benefit is the deliciousness of Reeses that has been around for so long, and that no other candy is quite as good as. This ad is far more creative than the earlier one because it has a unique message that makes the viewer interested and makes them feel that it affects them personally. This is also a strategy that they use – making YOU feel important.

Old Hanes:

I love this ad. “You read about the women who are an unforgettable, disarming, and a not-so-quiet sensation.” Then they say you can become one with run-free nylons. The pile of books that this seemingly naked girl holds refers to the women you may read about but is also showing that she probably is one of those women. This is very creative and unique. The “unique benefit” for this product is that for just a few pennies more, you can get nylons that won’t run. The target audience was probably professional women who wanted to look and feel professional, and they appealed to this audience by addressing the bold and smart women who was probably career-oriented.

New Hanes: This ad takes the modest amount of sexual pull that was in the old one and amplifies it. Instead of the girl being mostly covered with the implications that she’s not wearing anything, this girl is uncovered with just underwear. This does not seem to appeal to the woman who wants to be thought of as smart and independent as the old one does, but rather appeals to the women who are trying to be sexy; it appeals to the women who is trying to please someone else rather than just her. This shows a culture change from then, when feminism was more thought about, to now. I do not find this ad to be creative; they are just trying to sell their product by selling sex. Another advertising strategy that they are using is a famous person as a model. They do that in many of their other ads as well.

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

ADS - Good and Bad

For People’s United Bank: The top of this ad says “Serving Vermonters” in big bold letters, in the Vermont Life magazine. Below, it has a picture of the guy at High Mowing Seeds, a farm in the northeast kingdom, with a bunch of pumpkins, corn, and other crops. Underneath that, it says “Vermont is not just where we do business. It’s where over 1,ooo of our employees call homes.” This is a really good example of them catering to their target audience. They didn’t just put a generic ad in, they put one in that was specific to the readers of that magazine.

For the Breast Center Awareness Campaign: This as had three naked women from their waists to their bright pink lips, wearing bright pink bracelets in the shape of the breast cancer symbols. The interweaving of their skin instantly draws you in, and then the pink ties together the message of the ad. This was in The Oprah Magazine, so it also hit it’s target audience- - women.

For Downy: An orange with curly red hair and sunglasses is in the middle of this ad. How could it now be awesome? “Citrus & Ginger. Mash them together and what do you get?” This is for their citrus ginger laundry soap, but it’s unique and fun.

BAD ADS:

For McWayne Jewelers: This is a really boring ad. It just says the name of the business, when it was started, where it is located, blah, blah, blah…

For Meadow Leasing: This is a small ad that starts with the business name with the location underneath it. Then it has three boxes next to each other featuring some ground-level containers, office trailers, and storage trailers. Maybe storage is just boring, but I would never stop and read this ad if I wasn’t out to find a bad ad.

For Special K Chocolate Caramel Protein Meal Bars: This ad is a sketch that is supposed to look like a special board at a restaurant. It looks like a chalk board and says lunch specials on it and then says Special K Protein Shakes, and Special K Protein Bars. It then has pictures of the two sketched on so they look kind of chalky. I feel as if it looks like it is directed at children, yet it is a product that is for adults. I also just don’t like soft feel of the ad. I think it would be more appealing if the design was sharper.